Tuesday, October 8, 2013

The Pegasus

The skin was as delicate as fur
The wings move like the wind
It has the most bright colors
A big smile on the beauty's face
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9 comments:

  1. UnknownOctober 8, 2013 at 3:30 PM

    That is cool wesley.

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  2. UnknownOctober 8, 2013 at 4:00 PM

    thans

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  3. ScotOctober 8, 2013 at 4:56 PM

    That is a cool poem.

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  4. UnknownOctober 8, 2013 at 8:30 PM

    WOW! Great poem, Wesley! I love the descriptive vocabulary--it helps me get a good visual & sparks my imagination.

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  5. UnknownOctober 9, 2013 at 6:12 AM

    Thank you Mrs.Bloomfield. You make me feel good!

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    1. UnknownOctober 9, 2013 at 11:25 AM

      You are very welcome! I am so glad to get to read your writing, Wesley.

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  6. UnknownOctober 9, 2013 at 6:14 AM

    Thank you too Dad!

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  7. UnknownOctober 9, 2013 at 12:42 PM

    I am getting better at it Mrs Bloomfield thank you.

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    1. UnknownOctober 10, 2013 at 6:47 PM

      I agree! Keep writing, my young friend, and you'll only get better!

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